Okay, I now officially know better than to post ramblings about the upheavals of my story drafts. Not only is that last one incomprehensible but the fixes I’ve devised mean that when the story finally sees the light of day it won’t really resemble the weird tidbits I felt compelled to share.

(I have an actual plot now. That’s nice. I just finished banging it out in little cryptic notes to myself. I wonder if it’s going to work? I guess I’ll find out when I write it up.)