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Jan 25 06: “Take a deep breath, and squeeze for a count of two,” Mark said.

All has been revealed to Ed, and the gift accepted. He’s about to take a long, numb walk through the Village. Eventually, he’ll join up with the last three sentences, which wait patiently at the bottom of the document.

I want to be finished with this draft by the end of my lunch break tomorrow. But I have to be out of bed in five hours, and I’m not in it yet, so this is where I’ll stop.

Word count (by the SFWA formula): 7,000.

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